Hello Nathan I really like how you have added lots of detail and I like how you have said about how you cross the Moana every time you go to Wellington. Maybe next time you could add some more sentences in you first paragraph. I really enjoyed reading your sea week writing. From Lily
This is so cool! I like the way you have put these google slides together to give some good information about how you treasure the ocean. You did surf lifesavers and a bit of surfing. I love searching through rockpools myself, especially way up North. This reminds me to be very careful and respectful of those natural creatures that live there and not take anything home, like pretty shells. From Mum.
Hello Nathan I really like how you have added lots of detail and I like how you have said about how you cross the Moana every time you go to Wellington. Maybe next time you could add some more sentences in you first paragraph. I really enjoyed reading your sea week writing.
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This is so cool! I like the way you have put these google slides together to give some good information about how you treasure the ocean. You did surf lifesavers and a bit of surfing. I love searching through rockpools myself, especially way up North. This reminds me to be very careful and respectful of those natural creatures that live there and not take anything home, like pretty shells.
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