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Tuesday, 9 April 2019
Noho Marae Recount
Noho Marae Recount
For our Noho Marae trip we went to the Arahura Marae so we could
learn about the stories of the West Coast and so we could learn
about the heritage of our local area. We also went to the marae
so we could learn about the Māori culture.
learn about the stories of the West Coast and so we could learn
about the heritage of our local area. We also went to the marae
so we could learn about the Māori culture.
We went to the marae on the 5th and the 6th of March. It was in
the morning that we went and I went with Cailan’s mum in the car
with Charlie, Cailan and me.
the morning that we went and I went with Cailan’s mum in the car
with Charlie, Cailan and me.
The Arahura Marae is in Arahura which is down from our school.
We also went to the Arahura river to look for pounamu. The next
day we went to the Mananui Tramline for a walk and we walked to
Lake Mahinapua.
We also went to the Arahura river to look for pounamu. The next
day we went to the Mananui Tramline for a walk and we walked to
Lake Mahinapua.
The marae is a part of Ngāi Tahu and it is mainly about someone
who was in a boat but it got capsized and his friends died so he
got their heads and swam very far. Also we learnt about other
stories.
who was in a boat but it got capsized and his friends died so he
got their heads and swam very far. Also we learnt about other
stories.
What we did is we went to the marae and we did the powhiri.
Both the groups did a waiata and a speech. Then we had food
and went to the river to look for pounamu. Also we made statues
of Poutini and Waitaiki. Then we went back to have dinner and we
went outside to play games. I did rippa rugby and ki o rahi. After
that we had smores and listened to stories at the fire. The next
day we did our mihi and went to the Mananui Tramline to do the
track and we walked to Lake Mahinapua. At Lake Mahinapua we
heard the story about the guy who got his boat capsized and his
friends died.
Both the groups did a waiata and a speech. Then we had food
and went to the river to look for pounamu. Also we made statues
of Poutini and Waitaiki. Then we went back to have dinner and we
went outside to play games. I did rippa rugby and ki o rahi. After
that we had smores and listened to stories at the fire. The next
day we did our mihi and went to the Mananui Tramline to do the
track and we walked to Lake Mahinapua. At Lake Mahinapua we
heard the story about the guy who got his boat capsized and his
friends died.
Room 1 and Room 8 went to the Marae with some parents and
teachers. Also there was people at the marae that were nice and
helped us do fun things. The teachers that went were Ms Kemp and
Mrs Glue and Miss Ireland came for the powhiri then left to go back
to school. Then later in the day Miss Ireland came with Ms Barrow.
How we got to the marae is we all went in cars that we were
assigned with at school. Also the teachers travelled and parents
came that were from our school.
assigned with at school. Also the teachers travelled and parents
came that were from our school.
Friday, 5 April 2019
Thursday, 4 April 2019
Onomatopoeia Poem
The Chocolate Biscuit
Poem by Nathan Johnson
As I eat the chocolate biscuit I slashed
Through it with my teeth it smashed
My tooth and my biscuit fell out into the ocean
It got swept away with the motion
Of the current and it dragged it to China
Into a posh diner
And it got eaten
And beaten
By a child
With the spice as mild
Then it got digested
And invested
Into the Chinese bank
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Tuesday, 2 April 2019
My Selfie Poem
My Selfie Poem
I am from the orange beanbag,
from fresh water and smelly soap.
I am from the ferns out the back,
from the West Coast Basketball team.
I am from the punga tree.
I am from the sounds of cicadas chirping,
from the soft couch.
I’m from Rapahoe beach and Punakaiki,
from Aunty Annie and Uncle Chris.
I’m from swimming at the pool and watching movies.
From playing Fortnite with Dad and sleeping.
I’m from, “Kia ora.” and “How are you?”
From the pages of Shrek and Baby Shark.
I am from gaming and Fortnite.
I am from basketball, my backyard.
I’m from Wellington and New Zealand.
Macaroni and soup,
from World War 1.
From surviving Gallipoli
Mahatma Gandhi Reading Task
Mahatma Gandhi
Mahatma Gandhi, was given the name Mahatma, meaning great soul,
because he was a great soul, he did things for others and didn’t want
anything in return. He was against racism, he went to prison for the things
he did and he was very famous.
because he was a great soul, he did things for others and didn’t want
anything in return. He was against racism, he went to prison for the things
he did and he was very famous.
Firstly, Gandhi was greatly against racism. Mahatma Gandhi went to work
for the South African office of an Indian legal firm. This is when Gandhi first
encountered racism. When he was on a train, a white man wouldn’t sit next
to him. He found that lots of Indians in South Africa were given the worst
jobs and they lived in poverty. Gandhi started working for the rights of
Indians and he campaigned for twenty years. Gandhi said, “Make the
injustice visible. Be prepared to die for it.”
for the South African office of an Indian legal firm. This is when Gandhi first
encountered racism. When he was on a train, a white man wouldn’t sit next
to him. He found that lots of Indians in South Africa were given the worst
jobs and they lived in poverty. Gandhi started working for the rights of
Indians and he campaigned for twenty years. Gandhi said, “Make the
injustice visible. Be prepared to die for it.”
Secondly, Mahatma Gandhi was famous for the actions that he made
and what he believed in. He helped the Indians, by refusing to get his
finger print scanned and he wanted others to do the same. He thought
that he had helped the Indians in his country, and people started to
recognize the things that he had done. Other people started to follow in his
lead.
and what he believed in. He helped the Indians, by refusing to get his
finger print scanned and he wanted others to do the same. He thought
that he had helped the Indians in his country, and people started to
recognize the things that he had done. Other people started to follow in his
lead.
Gandhi’s main grumble was that under the British rule India had become
the world's poorest country. The British found India, while the Indian
people were already there and they tried to take over and rule over the
Indians. This was called colonisation.
the world's poorest country. The British found India, while the Indian
people were already there and they tried to take over and rule over the
Indians. This was called colonisation.
Finally, Gandhi went to prison because he refused to do things that the
government said to do and he protested peacefully against racism and
lots of Indians were arrested and went to prison. He said, ‘An eye for an
eye ends up making the whole world blind.’ Gandhi meant that fighting
each other was a bad thing and that it can do horrible things to people.
We agree with Gandhi because fighting can do very bad things to you,
like traumatize people and injure people. We believe that Mahatma
Gandhi shouldn’t have gone to prison because of what he believed in
and he just wanted the make South African people all equal.
government said to do and he protested peacefully against racism and
lots of Indians were arrested and went to prison. He said, ‘An eye for an
eye ends up making the whole world blind.’ Gandhi meant that fighting
each other was a bad thing and that it can do horrible things to people.
We agree with Gandhi because fighting can do very bad things to you,
like traumatize people and injure people. We believe that Mahatma
Gandhi shouldn’t have gone to prison because of what he believed in
and he just wanted the make South African people all equal.
In conclusion, Mahatma Gandhi was a great man and his name fitted
who he was. He was recognized for being against racism, he made good
choices and he also went to prison for believing in the things that he did.
His actions have affected us today because people of all races are allowed
to have any job and many people are inspired by him and do not want
racism in the world.
who he was. He was recognized for being against racism, he made good
choices and he also went to prison for believing in the things that he did.
His actions have affected us today because people of all races are allowed
to have any job and many people are inspired by him and do not want
racism in the world.
Thursday, 28 March 2019
Nelson Mandela Work
Nelson Mandela
Nelson Mandela is a man from South Africa, and he was the reason that we have
race relations day today. He fought against apartheid and segregation, in his
lifetime ( 18 July 1918, to 5 December 2013) he also won the Nobel Peace Prize.
He also was against white supremacy.
race relations day today. He fought against apartheid and segregation, in his
lifetime ( 18 July 1918, to 5 December 2013) he also won the Nobel Peace Prize.
He also was against white supremacy.
Firstly, Nelson Mandela fought against apartheid and segregation. Apartheid is
when only white people in South Africa are superior and they have good things,
when the blacks are treated unfairly. Segregation means where one group of
people like the whites are separated from black people and are treated
differently. I think apartheid and segregation is wrong because everyone should
be treated equally.
when only white people in South Africa are superior and they have good things,
when the blacks are treated unfairly. Segregation means where one group of
people like the whites are separated from black people and are treated
differently. I think apartheid and segregation is wrong because everyone should
be treated equally.
Secondly, Nelson Mandela was against white supremacy. In South Africa he
did not think that it was fair that only the white people got all the good things
in life. Only the white people got big houses, electricity and proper roads.
Nelson Mandela also thought that the black people should not have to live in
tiny hovels and should be allowed proper roads or electricity. He did not think
it was fair that because of their skin colour, that the black and the white people
got different rights. We agree with Nelson Mandela because we don’t think it
is fair either.
did not think that it was fair that only the white people got all the good things
in life. Only the white people got big houses, electricity and proper roads.
Nelson Mandela also thought that the black people should not have to live in
tiny hovels and should be allowed proper roads or electricity. He did not think
it was fair that because of their skin colour, that the black and the white people
got different rights. We agree with Nelson Mandela because we don’t think it
is fair either.
Finally, Nelson Mandela won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993. He shared the
Nobel Peace Prize with Frederik Willem de Klerk. De Klerk was the president
of South Africa. They won the Peace Prize because of their work fighting
against apartheid and segregation. We think that they deserved the Nobel
Peace Prize because what they were doing was right.
Nobel Peace Prize with Frederik Willem de Klerk. De Klerk was the president
of South Africa. They won the Peace Prize because of their work fighting
against apartheid and segregation. We think that they deserved the Nobel
Peace Prize because what they were doing was right.
In conclusion, Nelson Mandela is recognised today because he fought against
apartheid and segregation, he was against white supremacy, and he won the
nobel peace prize. Nelson Mandela was very important for the way he fought
for equal rights and helped support black people to have a better life. It affects
us today because everyone no matter what their skin colour is, they are
entitled to have equal rights.
apartheid and segregation, he was against white supremacy, and he won the
nobel peace prize. Nelson Mandela was very important for the way he fought
for equal rights and helped support black people to have a better life. It affects
us today because everyone no matter what their skin colour is, they are
entitled to have equal rights.
Wednesday, 28 November 2018
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Monday, 10 September 2018
Reducing Our Plastic Waste
For our topic about the environment we made beeswax wraps to use instead of glad wrap and fabric bags to use instead of plastic bags to reduce waste in our environment. We had a lot of adult helpers to help us with these. I enjoyed making these but they were a bit challenging. I learnt that the beeswax can melt and soak into fabric. I found it challenging to choose what type of fabric. To make the beeswax wrap we got a piece of baking paper on the ironing board, then we put on our fabric, then we sprinkled on some grated beeswax on, then we put another piece of beeswax wrap on top and ironed it. I have used the beeswax wrap a lot already and I like it much more than glad wrap. Here are some photos of what I made.
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Friday, 7 September 2018
Where To Next? - Literacy
Turning Old into New
Literacy
We are learning to understand about the environments around us and the negative
of positive impact our actions can have on these environments.
of positive impact our actions can have on these environments.
Success criteria;
- identify and explain some of the issues facing our environment today
- identify some of the negative impacts humans are having on the environment
- identify some positive actions people are taking both here and around the world to try and
- help look after our environment.
- identify some positive actions we can take at school and in our own lives to help our
- environment.
- learn about our local bush track and creek and identify some ways in which we can
- help to look after (kaitiakitanga) these areas.
Reading Learning Goals
-I am learning to use sub-headings to guide me to the main ideas in text.
-I am learning to use illustrations, text boxes, charts and graphs to help me make inferences so I
get more information from the text.
get more information from the text.
-I am learning to use more than one text, in print or electronic formats, to gather and check the
accuracy of information.
accuracy of information.
-I am learning to read a wide range of texts (e.g. encyclopaedias, websites, newspapers)
to gather and check information on a topic.
to gather and check information on a topic.
-I am learning to explain why the author has written a text.
-I am learning to read and understand text that contains academic and topic-specific vocabulary.
Read the text, ‘Turning Old Into New’ and then complete the following activities.
- Why is recycling a good idea?
Recycling is a good idea because it produces less waste. ✓
- How many tons of rubbish do New Zealanders send to landfills every year?
New Zealanders send 2.5 million tons of waste to landfills. ✓
- When rubbish breaks down what gas does it produce? What environmental problem
- does this contribute to?
When rubbish breaks down it produces Methane Gas and CO2 which contributes to Global
Warming. ✓
Warming. ✓
- Complete this sentence: Everything we use is made from Earth’s Natural Resources ✓
- Explain where these resources come from;
Wood: comes from trees and plants. ✓
Metal: comes from rocks that are mined from the ground. ✓
Most Plastic: comes from the oil. ✓
6) How does oil form?
Oil forms from the remains of plants and animals that lived millions of years ago. ✓
7) What are some of the things glass can be recycled into?
Glass can be recycled with aluminium cans to make roads. It can also be made back to sand and added to
sports field’s to drain away water. ✓
sports field’s to drain away water. ✓
8) What are some of the things cardboard can be recycled into?
Cardboard can be recycled into newsprint, writing paper, toilet paper and egg cartons. ✓
9) What can plastic with the number 1 be recycled into?
Plastic with the number 1 can be recycled into soft drink bottles, pillow and sleeping bag fillings, carpet
and clothing. ✓
and clothing. ✓
10) Attach a google drawing here that explains how number 1 plastics can be turned into
clothing.
clothing.
11) What are microfibres and what is the problem with them?
Microfibres are tiny fibres that come from our clothing and they go through sewers and
into the ocean and it makes some ocean animals sick. ✓
into the ocean and it makes some ocean animals sick. ✓
12) What is Earth Overshoot day?
Earth Overshoot day is a concept created by the Global Footprint Network. It marks the
date each year when people have used all the resources the planet can regenerate in that year. ✓
date each year when people have used all the resources the planet can regenerate in that year. ✓
Glossary - Write what these words mean
Atoms: the smallest particle of a substance that can exist by itself or be combined with
other atoms to form a molecule. ✓
other atoms to form a molecule. ✓
Carded: (relating to fibres) aligned in the same direction. ✓
Global Warming: a gradual increase in Earth’s average temperature due to increased levels
of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. ✓
of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. ✓
Malt: barley or other grain that has been used for brewing beer. ✓
Natural resources: materials found in nature that can be used by people, such as air, water, plants,
animals and rocks. ✓
animals and rocks. ✓
Synthetic: something that is made by people and is the result of combining different chemicals. ✓
In class we will be working on projects looking at issues around rubbish and what we
can do to help reduce this problem.
can do to help reduce this problem.
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Wednesday, 1 August 2018
Play Summary
Play Summary - Term 3 Weeks 1-2

For the next two weeks, you are working in groups to practice and perform
a play. This is using our oral language and reading skills in literacy.
Our key competency focus is participating and contributing.
a play. This is using our oral language and reading skills in literacy.
Our key competency focus is participating and contributing.
For writing, your task is to summarise the main events in your play in three
paragraphs. You must plan your writing first but it is up to you how you do your planning. You must also write a fourth paragraph about your experience of
practicing and performing your play.
paragraphs. You must plan your writing first but it is up to you how you do your planning. You must also write a fourth paragraph about your experience of
practicing and performing your play.
Yr 6
I am learning to organize my text into paragraphs which begin with the main idea and contain
supporting information/detail.
supporting information/detail.
I am learning to make links across paragraphs.
I am learning to use basic punctuation accurately.
I am learning to use dialogue punctuation accurately.
Yr 7
I am learning to use a range of different planning styles.
I am learning to plan my writing to suit the purpose of my writing.
I am learning to organize my ideas into paragraphs where the ideas are clearly related and
where
there are links within and between paragraphs.
where
there are links within and between paragraphs.
I am learning to use basic punctuation accurately in my writing.
I am learning to use complex punctuation to enhance my writing e.g. colons: and semi-colons; ,
and parentheses ().
and parentheses ().
Success Criteria
I will be successful when I can/have
-summarised the play in three paragraphs
-made links across my paragraphs
-used some basic and complex punctuation correctly (speech marks).
Once you have finished your writing highlight these success criteria green if you have met them
and can show them in your work. Highlight green in your work where you have met these
success criteria.
and can show them in your work. Highlight green in your work where you have met these
success criteria.
Māui and the Sun
Māui is a demigod that lived long, long ago. He has four brothers called: Māui Mua,
Māui Roto, Māui Taha, and Māui Waho. In the first part of this story, Māui and his brother's are complaining that Tamanuiterā is moving too fast and they don’t have
any time to do anything during the day. Māui says he can tame the sun and his brother’s
laugh at him but they say they will help him.
Māui Roto, Māui Taha, and Māui Waho. In the first part of this story, Māui and his brother's are complaining that Tamanuiterā is moving too fast and they don’t have
any time to do anything during the day. Māui says he can tame the sun and his brother’s
laugh at him but they say they will help him.
In the second part of this story, his brothers and the villagers help Māui to make
harakeke (flax) ropes to catch the sun and Māui chanted a karakia so that the ropes
are magical. Māui gets his magical jawbone off his Grandfather before he sets off.
harakeke (flax) ropes to catch the sun and Māui chanted a karakia so that the ropes
are magical. Māui gets his magical jawbone off his Grandfather before he sets off.
At the end of this story, when they are ready they set off towards the sun’s pit.
They only go by night so the sun doesn’t see them. When they get there they built a
clay wall to hide behind. Māui tells his brothers to throw the ropes when he says.
When the sun comes up, Māui yells, “Throw the ropes my brothers” and they stop
the sun. Māui hits it with his magical jawbone and tells it to go slowly every day.
From that day on the sun goes across the sky slowly.
They only go by night so the sun doesn’t see them. When they get there they built a
clay wall to hide behind. Māui tells his brothers to throw the ropes when he says.
When the sun comes up, Māui yells, “Throw the ropes my brothers” and they stop
the sun. Māui hits it with his magical jawbone and tells it to go slowly every day.
From that day on the sun goes across the sky slowly.
When my group did our play we were a bit silly at the start but we got better as it
went on. One thing we did well was the jawbone and our props that we used.
We participated and contributed by making props and all having a role in the play.
One thing I would improve next time is not using a script.
went on. One thing we did well was the jawbone and our props that we used.
We participated and contributed by making props and all having a role in the play.
One thing I would improve next time is not using a script.
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