OUR SKI TRIPWe are learning to write recounts. Recounts can be presented in many ways, including visually. I have presented my recount through word art and photography. My opinion of the trip was that it good because I learnt lots and had fun.
Hi my name is Ellma from St. Patrick's School. The thing I like about your work is that you understood how many ways you can do a recount, But next time check with your classmates and have a buddy conference because from what I read it kind of didn't make sense. Thank You. Bye
Kia Ora my name is Meleana, I liked how you put your writing in many recount ways, but the thing I didn't like about it is that you didn't agree with all of your other classmates before you did your work, I saw that some of your other classmates wrote the opposite of what you've wrote. Haere rā
Hi my name is Ellma from St. Patrick's School. The thing I like about your work is that you understood how many ways you can do a recount, But next time check with your classmates and have a buddy conference because from what I read it kind of didn't make sense. Thank You. Bye
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DeleteKia Ora my name is Meleana, I liked how you put your writing in many recount ways, but the thing I didn't like about it is that you didn't agree with all of your other classmates before you did your work, I saw that some of your other classmates wrote the opposite of what you've wrote. Haere rā
ReplyDeleteHello Nathan,I'm Matthew from Saint Patrick's School
ReplyDeleteI like your writing it was great.