Hi Nathan, I like how you talked about what you did in steps like first, second, third. Also I liked how you clearly said how much water was in the carrot. Maybe next time you should put a space where the date is, not together. Apart from that your carrot result writing was great.
Kia Ora Nathan It's James from Mamaku Hub I like that you experiment it was on a carrot. There is also no space let on the drawing that is a good thing and it is a good presentation, pai mahi (good work).
Kia ora Nathan. I'm Sam from Mamaku 2 at Grey main school. I really like how much detail you have put into this step by step presentation of how you worked out how much water was in a carrot. Would the mold on the carrot affect the outcome on the presentation? Yours Sincerely. Sam.
Kia ora Nathan. It's Sebastian from the Mamaku Hub. That is very interesting I might do some more research on that tell you how much more infomation. Do you like carrots? Next time can you put a real picture of a carrot. Mai (From) Sebastian.
Hi Nathan,
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about what you did in steps like first, second, third. Also I liked how you clearly said how much water was in the carrot. Maybe next time you should put a space where the date is, not together. Apart from that your carrot result writing was great.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Nathan It's James from Mamaku Hub I like that you experiment it was on a carrot. There is also no space let on the drawing that is a good thing and it is a good presentation, pai mahi (good work).
ReplyDeleteKia ora Nathan.
ReplyDeleteI'm Sam from Mamaku 2 at Grey main school.
I really like how much detail you have put into this step by step presentation of how you worked out how much water was in a carrot. Would the mold on the carrot affect the outcome on the presentation?
Yours Sincerely.
Sam.
Hi Sam,
DeleteThank you for the positive, thoughtful and helpful comment on my blog. The mold does not affect the outcome of the presentation.
Kia ora Nathan. It's Sebastian from the Mamaku Hub. That is very interesting I might do some more research on that tell you how much more infomation. Do you like carrots? Next time can you put a real picture of a carrot. Mai (From) Sebastian.
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