I am in the middle of the ocean with my family on a waka. It feels tiny compared to the huge expanse of vast ocean. The waves are massive and we have very small amounts of food. I am pretty nervous about seeing this new land. We navigate using the stars at night time to show us which direction to go.
From Nathan.
Kia ora Nathan,
ReplyDeleteYour letter structure looks fantastic! I like the way you have greeted the reader, written about the voyage to New Zealand and ended the letter with your name. I also like when you said "the huge expanse of vast ocean". What great words you have chosen to use!
How do you think your emotions would change when you arrived to New Zealand? If it were me I think I would be really excited to explore the new land! It would be exciting meeting the people who are already there and hopefully I would become friends with them!
Noho ora mai,
Emiely :)